Can anyone check my grammar,grammatical mistakes and sentence structure please?
Submitted by Guest on Mon, 03/23/2009 - 03:11.
The little fox lives on a star near yours,
so do not feel sad when you say goodbye.
She practises the piano hard every day,
and tends a little strawberry field.
She wishes to become as diligent, brave and talented as you.
Did you know the little fox also has dreams?
Did you know there are many people in your world, but I only have you?
The little fox lives on a star near yours,
so do not feel sad when you say goodbye.
She practices the piano hard every day,
and tends a little strawberry field.
She wishes to become as diligent, brave and talented as you.
Do you know the little fox also has dreams?
Do you know there are many people in this world, but I only have you.